Dark Poetry #1 |
its gone bad..how sad |
just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
I told you everything about me and him I told you things from deep within Things with you i only shared and stupid me i thought u cared I told you things he said when we talked I cried to you when we fought i told you how i felt inside i told you all the reasons i cried you said you didnt want to hurt me so you lied if your only friends tell me.......whats there to hide? "is there really a you and him" thats what you said "or is it your imagination Ang" is what i read how could you not believe all that i have said do you really think this is all in my head? that one sentence is all you needed to say now i see you the real way Another "friend" i thought i had Another "friendship" gone bad.....how sad |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
J_A_F~ I'm sorry your "friend" let you down so bad..... I have been in your shoes. She isn't my friend any more. No one needs a friend like that.-SEA |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
As life rolls on you soon discover the 'real' friends and the 'fake' ones. Real friends are diamonds, fake ones are cubic zirconia's. Sometimes it takes a while to sort them out, but it is worth the effort, for in the end you have the true gems. I have a wonderful old friend of 30 years now, she only rings or comes round when she has a problem, when I have one she isn't even interested!! So sorry this happened to you, i know, it really hurts... Wonderfully written There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
excellent work about betrayal. frindship is so wonderful when it's true but can hurt so bad when it is not. jann elizabeth Love is so short, and forgetting so long. -Pablo Neruda |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
Thanx guyz it seems like i have found so many "friends" like this but very few of the real kind. Sea- you are so right. At first I was looking at it as a big loss then i realized it was a gain. i had eliminated one more fake friend out of my life and she can't hurt me again Isis- I agree i just wish there was more diamonds in this big bag of cubic zirconias guess i'll keep sorting Jannel- Thanx a lot yes it does hurt a lot but i guess its better that way once there gone they cant hurt you anymore ~Angie |
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sports2girl Junior Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 14 |
This is an excellent poem. I have ahd many friends like this and i thought i was the only one. Now i know i am not. Thanks for writing what i could never sya!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is excellent writing..most people have lots of friends but only a few that they can totally trust and tell everything..I have some friends I can only tell a little bit about my personal life to and a few that I would tell anything and everything. Jasmes |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
Thanx for reading sports2girl: There are many of us. James: for some reason i luv when you reply to my stuff. I think we got a lot in common like the things we go through/our feelings. I take what everyone says serious but I take what you say to heart. know what i mean? n e way thanx 4 responding. |
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Virgo Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 46tx |
I've been in the same situation...although it doesn't get any easier, it's always great to know who are your true friends. Sometimes you're pleasantly surprised. |
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