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Zunera
Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 30
Pakistan

0 posted 2000-03-30 12:38 PM


How beautiful those words are;
Never Spoken, Never heard;

How charming those traites are;
Unseen, Unsighted;

How blessed those firends are;
Never met, Never apart;

How enchanting their lives are;
Unlived, Unembraced;

How fantasized this world is;
far from reality, far far behind;
the Vieled Truth !


 

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danni
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since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
1 posted 2000-03-30 12:59 PM


very well done. i enjoyed the read much! a great statement in few words.
just_another_fe
Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN
2 posted 2000-03-30 10:44 PM


Zunera~
Am I going crazy or did you put this on a reply to someones poem cuz i swear i read it lol.Anyway its great. short but powerful  
~Angie

dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

3 posted 2000-03-31 11:03 PM


A very good poem Zunera.

Short and to the point.

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


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