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Intuitive DEATH |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest 
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Sitting here Aware It's the stench of death A death I sometimes fear A death I sometimes welcome A death I could choose A death forced Intuitive thoughts Tell me it is near Tells me I have no choice This death will come my way I'll have no say It can be today It can be tomorrow How it will come I do not know But I feel it's cold reality This death could be in peace This death could be in violence It tells me it will not be pain free I know it's sting will be felt This death I feel even now Has taken hold of me I know not the hour Only of it's certainty And it's power |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
Illusion~ This was a good poem.Death isn't my favorite thing to think / talk about though ~Angie "If your scared to die, then why should you live"-LOX |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
it's simply beautiful ...the way you express the feelings are so emotional ..... well done Illusion  |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Death and taxes two certainties in life. I know what you mean though, like if the soul dies the body does too, and you feel the soul dying so it won't be long... Am I right in this assumption. Well written There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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