Dark Poetry #1 |
~*Falling*~ |
Angel Usagi Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 11 |
I am falling. Slowly. I am falling. Others are falling. Down the hole of sorrow. Others are falling. There's nothing we can do. Some don't notice the others falling. Down the deep dark hole we've created for ourselves. We can only hope... that soon we will grow wings. And save ourselves from our shadowy death. < !signature--> [This message has been edited by Angel Usagi (edited 03-31-2000).] |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
welcome to passions!!! well done. sounds like the self-centered/individualism of depression and hopelessness. have hope...your wings will save you b/c you have them you just have to teach them to fly! |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Welcome to Dark Passions Usagi, I love this poem, you are so right. We all fall, but you will grow your wings and fly out shining! I know this to be true Welcome Again, dhuron The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
WELCOME! this is a great poem. we all have wings..some of us have broken ones and some of us havn't learned to use them..but one day we will all fly! **HUG** take care Broken Wings "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
great way to begin your stay here at passions. we hope you enjoy every minute! jann elizabeth Love is so short, and forgetting so long. -Pablo Neruda |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
nice piece hope to see more of you work by the way,Welcome to Passion and DP |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome Angel!! Indeed we all fall and struggle to take flight again. Wonderful work!! There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Welcome to Passions great first post ... after every darkness there comes a light never give up hope... something I'm learning through this forum Mystical being which makes ink flow Surround me in your incandescent glow Fill my brain with thoughts and rhyme As I try to capture but a moment in time ~Shan~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I liked this Angel..during every fall hope is always around us to rescue us when we are ready. James |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Excellent poem...welcome to Dark Passions...I hope you come to enjoy it here as much as we do. Yours truly, Angel "The dark weight of the hour humming madly filling my head with blood and sorrow and dread the executioner's song." -Jewel "The Dark Bells" ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
AU~ Welcome! Yea, we all fall at one time or another. Trust your wings are there and you can fly! -SEA |
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Hope, tears, and renewal Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74 |
One day, we shall all grow wings, and then we will fly on the wind.... awesome writing, Usagi. So true, so true. |
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ShadowHeart Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 49 |
Great Poem! You need to trust yourself to find your wings and learn how to use them...Welcome to DP! Love is our greatest weakness but when it's found, it's our greatest strength. |
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