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Angel Usagi
Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 11


0 posted 2000-03-29 06:57 PM


I am falling.
Slowly.
I am falling.
Others are falling.
Down the hole of sorrow.
Others are falling.
There's nothing we can do.
Some don't notice the others falling.
Down the deep dark hole we've created for ourselves.
We can only hope...
that soon we will grow wings.
And save ourselves from our shadowy death.

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[This message has been edited by Angel Usagi (edited 03-31-2000).]

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Aiden Kelly
Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148
Ft. Wayne, IN USA
1 posted 2000-03-29 07:01 PM


welcome to passions!!!   well done.  sounds like the self-centered/individualism of depression and hopelessness.  have hope...your wings will save you b/c you have them you just have to teach them to fly!  
dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

2 posted 2000-03-29 07:02 PM


Welcome to Dark Passions Usagi,

I love this poem, you are so right.  We all fall, but you will grow your wings and fly out shining!  I know this to be true

Welcome Again,

dhuron

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


Broken Wings
Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157
Miami, FL.
3 posted 2000-03-29 07:11 PM


WELCOME! this is a great poem. we all have wings..some of us have broken ones and some of us havn't learned to use them..but one day we will all fly!

**HUG**
take care
Broken Wings


 "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT


Jannel
Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
4 posted 2000-03-29 07:25 PM


great way to begin your stay here at passions. we hope you enjoy every minute!
jann elizabeth


 Love is so short, and forgetting so long.
-Pablo Neruda

CrEaTuRe
Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia
5 posted 2000-03-29 11:07 PM


nice piece   hope to see more of you work
by the way,Welcome to Passion and DP  

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 2000-03-30 12:20 PM


Welcome Angel!!  Indeed we all fall and struggle to take flight again.  Wonderful work!!  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



StarrGazer
Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas
7 posted 2000-03-30 03:46 PM


Welcome to Passions  great  first  post  ... after every darkness there comes a light  never give up hope... something I'm learning through this  forum  

 Mystical being
which makes ink flow
Surround me in
your incandescent glow
Fill my brain with
thoughts and rhyme
As I try to capture
but a moment in time
~Shan~


JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2000-03-30 04:11 PM


I liked this Angel..during every fall hope is always around us to rescue us when we are ready.  James
Dark Enchantress
Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
9 posted 2000-03-30 05:24 PM


Excellent poem...welcome to Dark Passions...I hope you come to enjoy it here as much as we do.  

               Yours truly,
                  Angel


 "The dark weight of the hour
humming madly
filling my head
with blood
and sorrow
and dread
the executioner's song."
-Jewel
"The Dark Bells"

~*Angel of Darkness*~



SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
10 posted 2000-03-30 05:28 PM


AU~ Welcome! Yea, we all fall at one time or another. Trust your wings are there and you can fly! -SEA
Hope, tears, and renewal
Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74

11 posted 2000-03-30 07:37 PM


One day, we shall all grow wings, and then we will fly on the wind.... awesome writing, Usagi.  So true, so true.
ShadowHeart
Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 49

12 posted 2000-03-30 08:39 PM


Great Poem!  You need to trust yourself to find your wings and learn how to use them...Welcome to DP!

 Love is our greatest weakness
but when it's found,
it's our greatest strength.

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