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Virgo
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since 2000-03-27
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0 posted 2000-03-29 03:00 PM


In the beginning, I gave myself to you
completely and unconditionally.
But you lied to me...
Telling me that you were over her completely.
How can you expect me to forget so easily?
When the pain you have given me runs so deeply.
If you know me like you say you do...
Then you should know how hard it was to give
myself to you.
Give my heart time to heal...
So I can show you how I truly feel.
In time you will see that the insecurities
and pain will fade.
If your love is true then you won't mind the wait.
Please be patient...
For you will see..
As time goes, your love will set me free.




[This message has been edited by Virgo (edited 03-29-2000).]

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Broken Wings
Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157
Miami, FL.
1 posted 2000-03-29 03:22 PM


I love this poem...it's great that you know what it is you need to heal...i hope he will be patient. good luck!  

take care
Broken Wings


 "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT


SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
2 posted 2000-03-29 04:30 PM


Virgo~ If he can't be patient, then he's not worth your love. Great poem.-SEA
just_another_fe
Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN
3 posted 2000-03-29 04:37 PM



Virgo~
I agree with
these guyz if he
really loves you he will
wait and if he doesn't then he
is not worth recieving the
love you have to
give.Good
Luck  
~Angie


Hope, tears, and renewal
Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74

4 posted 2000-03-29 04:42 PM


I loved this... so true, so true.
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