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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
I feel the life being sucked out of me My mind losing my soul darkening My heart ripped open Bleeding With Sorrow Pain with every beat Uncontrollable shivers Sitting here Reflecting on the past Pain, Sadness All I know Waiting for my Impending Doom How I want it To Leave this world I wish to banish my heart Lock it up for eternity So I won't have to feel the pain So I won't feel anything Why Have a heart For people to hurt you Feel pain everyday Know nothing but Sorrow “Friends” betray They strike fatal blows. They leave you all alone. Love, a horrid trick in this world Corrupted! Untrue and evil Strangers, my closets friends have become Distant and uncaring Punished I am being punished for a past life. Eternally punished Death, a mercy, not available to me Agony is mine Choking! every second Inching towards Death, slowly ruthlessly Trapped forever, Karma has such vengeance I am to suffer the perpetual wrath of Karma and Fate The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Sandra Cox Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 48Essex, London,UK |
A very dark poem, wonderfully written. Things cannot really be that bleak can they? Best Wishes Sandra |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
dhron~ Wow....... if you feel as though you are being punished for a past life, then maybe you might want to be REAL nice this time so you don't have to do this again!  No, really, this was an excellent poem. Karma has a way of bringing good things to your heart too. Don't close your heart.-SEA |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Wonderful work, past failings etc. The Karma thing is true, what you send out good or bad, comes back times three. You think rotten, mean, hatefully, it comes back in your life as darkness etc. Great work There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Thank you all.*S* Sandra, at one point yes it was much worse. This Poem reflects my darkest period. Sea and Isis, thanks for your words. This was the hardest poem for me to write, emotional it was straining, I could feel the tears as i wrote but I am glad I did write it. By writing this poem, some of that past hurt seems to have been removed. |
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Hope, tears, and renewal Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74 |
Wonderful poem. I wish you luck in finding hope... keep looking, I swear it's out there. |
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