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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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I'm ready for the Darkness here comes the night as shadows melt together chasing away the light Tourtured Souls crying breaking free from day as shadows melt together they come out to play Each one seeking comfort in the lack of light here in the Darkness our spirits take flight Goddess Isis~ guiding us along Brother Michael~ sings a painful song We all relate We all hold tight as shadows melt together here comes the night! -SEA- |
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ZuMBLe Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 33 |
A poem about this forum. =) It describes this forum well. ZuM |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
I like the image of the shadows melting together  "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time that you've never had it before." ~author unknown~ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ZuMBLe and Tess~ glad you liked! -SEA |
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Hope, tears, and renewal Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74 |
Wow, that was great! It really painted an image for us. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Oh Sea thankyou!! It is a nice thought too, in the darkness we all gather together to sing our songs. Well done and thanks  There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
Sea~ I have to agree with Tess. I also liked the shadows melting together It gives a good picture good job ~Angie [This message has been edited by just_another_fe (edited 03-29-2000).] |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
SEA- great job it really captures what this forum is !! Well done Mystical being which makes ink flow Surround me in your incandescent glow Fill my brain with thoughts and rhyme As I try to capture but a moment in time ~Shan~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"here comes the night"...yes I remember that song. I can see my baby walking down the street with another gu..uuuuy. Here it comes..here comes the night. I really enjoyed this and loved the reference to Isis and Michael. James |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Hope~ glad you liked this, it was fun to write! Isis~ this was fun, I couldn't help putting you and Michael in this! J_A_F~ I really liked the way it sounded too!  Starr~ thank you James~ I love music and I have no idea what song you mean, who sings it? I'm glad you liked this. -SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
SEA this is excellent... I love the repetative line of melting together and its a perfect tribute for our dark forum and our king and queen rulers. great job on this Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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thebeautybrat Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114Florida |
this is a very touching poem!! i thought you had great work!!! very nice job!! ***** Come by and see my poem!!! it's called *This is What Some Call Love* thanks!! |
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ShadowHeart Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 49 |
Good job here...very deep, though, I'm not to sure if the shadows in your poem are bad or not. Love is our greatest weakness but when it's found, it's our greatest strength. |
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