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Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 2000-03-28 09:23 AM


Into the sea
low below the tide
above and beyond
Hope and dreams
Love and creation
Heart and soul

Dive deep down
flow in me
See me fly
freedom in tow
living a dream
In the nights

I slowly trickle
down the sink
holding breath
In the drink
to be held
Yes i think

To and Fro
In the seas
Hands so cold
Set me free
Deep down low

  Did you write the Book of Love
And do you have faith in God above
If the Bible tells you so
Do you believe in rock 'n roll
Can music save your mortal soul
And can you teach me how to dance real slow


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Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-03-28 11:11 AM


Dive deep down
flow in me
See me fly
freedom in tow
living a dream
In the nights

I slowly trickle
down the sink
holding breath
In the drink
to be held
Yes i think

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this is lovely walter...I enjoy seeing this side of you in your writing...very nice
take care, jm

 Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman


dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

2 posted 2000-03-28 07:03 PM


Very Nice Walter I enjoyed reading it.


daniel

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


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