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Crystal Lake(Isis Challenge) |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Under the starry sky Quiet, not another Soul around, only me the stars and the Lake The Tranquil Lake Reflecting the wonderous stars Gently moving to the pull of the mystical moon The Sacred Stars such beauty, that calls. Calls out to my Soul To Join them, up in the sky A Shooting Star, darting in the sky Watching In awe, under it's spell Nature working in a cosmic plane I want, no I need to be there Looking Up from the Crystal Lake, Yearning to return home Home, to the stars, all is quiet I am at peace watching nature's cosmic beauty. < !signature--> The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson [This message has been edited by dhuron (edited 03-27-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The Tranquil Lake Reflecting the wonderous stars Gently moving to the pull of the mystical moon The Sacred Stars such beauty, that calls. Calls out to my Soul To Join them, up in the sky A Shooting Star, darting in the sky Watching In awe, under it's spell Natur working in a cosmic plane I want, no I need to be there ------------- DH, this is exceptional..superb imagery... very well written... very calming to read... great work, take care, jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
a wonderful piece indeed. very well done. |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Janet, Thank you for your very kind words. I'm glad you liked it Thank you Danni, A different type for me...and I think I did rather well. Thank you two The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
"A Shooting Star, darting in the sky Watching In awe, under it's spell Nature working in a cosmic plane I want, no I need to be there" i loved it ... beuatiful imagination... you don't have to understand completely..to love completely... remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday..Avanti Rao |
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Veil_Gypsy Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 44Trapped in Veils of Starlight, and happy to be on my cosmic trail |
Oh if only such places were real....oh to wander in to the dream scape you've created...would be heaven indeed....very well done !! BRAVO!! Love Always  The Gypsy Bard She is like a cat in the dark and then she is your darkness....she rules her life like a bird in flight...Bard Gypsy |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
The heavens do it for you huh? Superb imagery here Daniel. You met my challenge easily and with beauty. Well done..  There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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