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dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
Posts 476


0 posted 2000-03-27 10:44 PM


Under the starry sky
Quiet, not another
Soul around, only me
the stars and the Lake

The Tranquil Lake
Reflecting the wonderous stars
Gently moving to the
pull of the mystical moon

The Sacred Stars
such beauty, that calls.
Calls out to my Soul
To Join them, up in the sky

A Shooting Star, darting in the sky
Watching In awe, under it's spell
Nature working in a cosmic plane
I want, no I need to be there

Looking Up from the
Crystal Lake, Yearning to return home
Home, to the stars, all is quiet
I am at peace watching nature's cosmic beauty.
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 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson



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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-03-27 11:19 PM


The Tranquil Lake
Reflecting the wonderous stars
Gently moving to the
pull of the mystical moon

The Sacred Stars
such beauty, that calls.
Calls out to my Soul
To Join them, up in the sky

A Shooting Star, darting in the sky
Watching In awe, under it's spell
Natur working in a cosmic plane
I want, no I need to be there

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DH, this is exceptional..superb imagery...
very well written...
very calming to read...
great work, take care, jm

 Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman


danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
2 posted 2000-03-28 01:55 AM


a wonderful piece indeed. very well done.
dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

3 posted 2000-03-28 04:19 AM


Janet, Thank you for your very kind words. I'm glad you liked it


Thank you Danni, A different type for me...and I think I did rather well.

Thank you two

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


AVANTI
Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
4 posted 2000-03-28 01:44 PM


"A Shooting Star, darting in the sky
Watching In awe, under it's spell
Nature working in a cosmic plane
I want, no I need to be there"
i loved it ...
beuatiful imagination...


 you don't have to understand completely..to love completely...
remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday..Avanti Rao



Veil_Gypsy
Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 44
Trapped in Veils of Starlight, and happy to be on my cosmic trail
5 posted 2000-03-28 01:48 PM


Oh if only such places were real....oh to wander in to the dream scape you've created...would be heaven indeed....very well done !! BRAVO!!

Love Always
  
The Gypsy Bard


 She is like a cat in the dark and then she is your darkness....she rules her life like a bird in flight...Bard Gypsy

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 2000-03-30 06:04 PM


The heavens do it for you huh?  Superb imagery here Daniel.  You met my challenge easily and with beauty.  Well done..  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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