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| Dark Poetry #1 |
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Schoolgirl |
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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
i walk down the lonely corridor that was once so full of laughter and life. the end is within sight. the bright, lovely world outside blinds me. why are the lights in here so dim? so dim in here... must make it to the light. why aren't i moving? a bell rings. people file out of rooms. laughing. why? are they laughing at me? no one is talking to me. i slowly continue walking through the cold corridor, pushing through the crowds of people. ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ I'll be here...why? I'll be waiting...for what? 'll be waiting for you so...if you come here, you'll find me... I promise. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
School not always remembered as a happy place. Good work  There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Yes High School or School in general was not always the best thing. If you see the end is near hold out...it'll be over soon enough The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Sandra Cox Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 48Essex, London,UK |
I thankfully only have happy memories of school. Best Wishes Sandra |
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Angel Usagi Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 11 |
Great poem! It really captures school like it is! ~*Angel Usagi*~ |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Great post so easy to get lost in the sea of people in school ... Mystical being which makes ink flow Surround me in your incandescent glow Fill my brain with thoughts and rhyme As I try to capture but a moment in time ~Shan~ |
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Hope, tears, and renewal Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74 |
Awesome work... I don't think you were just talking about school here. |
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thebeautybrat Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114Florida |
very nice work!! i felt the feelings exactly!!! hey!! why don't you stop by my poem?? it's called *This is What Some Call Love* Tell me your thoughts!! |
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