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dhuron
Member

since 2000-03-19

Posts 476

0 posted 2000-03-27 10:02 AM

In the still darkness
The body and soul sit
reflecting
events passed

No light can penetrate the shell
of dark surrounding.
A faint light appears within
It is the weakened Soul

Yearning; Needing
Faintly whispering,
To the mind and heart
the desire not to be alone

The desire to reach out
to another soul
To travel to a Place
for Souls to Heal

The Faint Whisper
grows weaker
The Soul Whispers
to the hearts of others

Hoping that one will hear:
to heal
to listen
to not let it be alone;anymore.

ZuMBLe
Junior Member

since 2000-03-27

Posts 33

1 posted 2000-03-27 10:10 AM

Sometimes the body and soul can be brought down so much by emptiness and loneliness that we can only hope that someone will come along and save us from the darkness.. Well written poem. It puts into words what some of us feel and can't explain.

ZuMBLe

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

2 posted 2000-03-27 10:26 AM

I can relate to this completely. The hope dwindling...the whisper growing weaker...
the need.

Wonderful poem.

Michael

StarrGazer
Senior Member

since 2000-03-05

Posts 679
Texas

3 posted 2000-03-27 02:17 PM

A job well done this poem is so beautiful in the most heart wrenching way it captures longing and sadness and even hope and weaves a little spell with its words

"A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning"
~Randal Jarrell~

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

4 posted 2000-03-27 08:08 PM

:Like Michael I can relate, the hearts voice it softens, hope fades, life force dimming.
Well done

There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

AVANTI
Senior Member

since 2000-02-02

Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE

5 posted 2000-03-28 02:07 PM

wonderful poem...
i love the end...

you don't have to understand completely..to love completely...
remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday..Avanti Rao

dhuron
Member

since 2000-03-19

Posts 476

6 posted 2000-03-28 07:21 PM

Thank you all.

Perhaps your hearts heard the faint whisper?

Just a thought....

The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson

Tess
Member

since 2000-03-22

Posts 288
Australia

7 posted 2000-03-29 10:08 AM

this one gave me the feeling of meditation..silent..and astral travel..that inner reaching out...the soul searching for its other half..attempting to connect....
a wistful sadness in the final lines....

"Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time
that you've never had it before."
~author unknown~

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