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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Surrounded by Darkness, frightening yet calming. The spirit is lost, looking for the wavering beacons The spirit calls out, but the darkness swallows the plea Forlorn, the spirit falls into the engulfing abyss Falling, the spirit spots a beacon, wavering, yet constant. Heads toward the beacon The spirit finds another lost soul Connected by pain, the two search for the way back. As the darkness begins to fade, The two souls begin to shine once again |
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mcclain Junior Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 13 |
Wow. Great poem! Maybe you should have titled it "Lost and Found." I can really relate to the theme - it hit home for me right now...I very much enjoyed reading it. [This message has been edited by mcclain (edited 03-26-2000).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
A dark message of hope, it can happen, I'm living proof... Well done hon  There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I hope they left a bread crumb trail or something - I'm still flailing down here in that abyss you speak of. Great poem, dhuron. Michael |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Thank you all for the replies. This was inspired by a very close friend. Without I would still be lost in the darkness without hope. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Dhuron~ this is so great!! Love it! -SEA |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Well Daniel, hold onto that special friend, we all need someone like that for courage and support.. A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
dhuron: here's to your friend. A big thank you for this, And I want that trail also. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Thank you Sea, I'm glad you like it I will Isis.*S* Thank you for the comments Joel, a trail...hmmmmm Look for 2 stars in the darkness that'll lead the way*S* The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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