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| Dark Poetry #1 |
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My Prison |
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Lonely Shadow Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 128Virginia 
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I live in a prison without stone or iron bars but of guilt and sorrow I feel that I have wronged someone whom I care more than life itself I tell her that I care for her and that she is my friend but somewhere inside of me fears that my love for her will be my downfall her heart lies with another their love has faded utmost certainty but she is afraid to face her lover and speak that bitter truth I give advice to her as any friend would do to help but I feel that I have hurt her by trying to help her do something that even in the darkest depths of my soul I could never do to have what's left of her love torn assunder with help from me to know, that someone I care about someone who I love most dearly that I may have ruined something that she may still believe is there to see my being, my loving nature torn apart with deadly presision but I still ask myself what is worse to love someone who doesn't care for you or to lose that love that you cherish most To find true love is to know true happiness... to lose true love is to lose everything |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very interesting thoughts here...you can only be responsible for your own love. James |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Lonely Shadow, Very thought provoking. Hope things work out for the best....somehow. Joy |
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ShadowHeart Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 49 |
How could I not reply to another shadow...Great poem! Keep writing... Love is our greatest weakness but when it's found, it's our greatest strength. |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
very deep ad a lot to think about... well written you don't have to understand completely..to love completely... remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday..Avanti Rao |
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