Dark Poetry #1 |
Just Friends |
Bronx Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84Oviedo, Florida, U.S. |
Just Friends You say you love me, And I love you too, But I love you in a different way, Not the way you do, I tell you that I like you, But I only want to be Friends, I like you very much, I want to be together till the end, I say I love you, And you love me too, But You love me in a different way, Not the way I do, You tell me that you like me, But You only want to be friends, You like me very much, You want to be friends till the end, So you see my friends, No matter what I do, No matter what I say, I still end up being screwed! by Bronx Be careful! It's a jungle out there! |
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StarryEyed Junior Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 20Florida |
Great job Bronx! Dont you hate how life always 'screws' you over?? ~StarryEyed It takes a minute to give your heart away, It takes as second for it to break. It takes a lifetime to forget that special someone, And the impact that they make. |
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Dream_Cloud Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 10Daytona Beach, FL USA |
Nice poem...love the last line. Interesting that you always get screwed, but you're still such a happy person, right? Good job, Mr. Popular! |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Hmm...Quite Intresting. your poem holds truth, and I know someone in that same situation. Good Job |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Very nice poem here. Tis so true on the aspects of life. Peace, Dark_Kisses_Within I do not love you for being perfect..... I love you for being perfect for me!! |
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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
Hmmm...interesting...do I know this person? Or is it another of those made-up people? ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ I'll be here...why? I'll be waiting...for what? 'll be waiting for you so...if you come here, you'll find me... I promise. |
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Sandra Cox Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 48Essex, London,UK |
Nice Poem, well written. Good Work!! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
It is true and so sad that so many today are users or takes, not givers. When I was about 21 I had to look hard at all my friends, and decide those who were true and those who were not. It was tough, but I am endlessly happy I did that, sorted the diamonds from the cubic zirconias!!! Great work hon ! There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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