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StarryEyed
Junior Member

since 2000-03-22

Posts 20
Florida

0 posted 2000-03-24 06:04 PM

You left me here all alone,
On this sad pathetic earth.
You were taken away from me so fast,
In a second you were gone.

On dark nights I wonder if you still watch me now,
Are you happy wherever you are?
Why do I feel such pain whenever you enter my mind,
When will I be able to see you again.

Its so cruel how you had to leave,
I wonder why it couldn't have been me.
Even though i know i will see you soon,
I can't help the lonliness and pain i feel when i think of you.

My only wish is to be where you are,
I feel we are joined through love.
Carry me through my pain walk me through life,
Just help me on this earth until I join you up above.

Unspoken love is the loudest of all

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 2000-03-24 06:08 PM

It sounds to me like you already have your guardian angel up in heaven watching over you. You will see them again... in the meantime, make your life worth living in honour of them, that is what I would do...
Heartfelt piece, well done

There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

2 posted 2000-03-24 06:37 PM

So beautiful and so heartfelt Starry...in a way I understand how you feel. I'm going through something similar...but just as Isis has said...live your life with beauty and grace until your moment comes. Hang in there... *hugglez*

Yours truly,
Angel

"The dark weight of the hour
humming madly
filling my head
with blood
and sorrow
and dread
the executioner's song."
-Jewel
"The Dark Bells"

~*Angel of Darkness*~

Darla
New Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 8

3 posted 2000-03-24 07:22 PM

Beautiful poem.I know that deep within you might feel all alone being away from this person but know that they will always be there no matter what.. Especially in memory no one can ever take that away from you.. Thank you for sharing .......

Bronx
Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 84
Oviedo, Florida, U.S.

4 posted 2000-03-24 08:37 PM

hey-
i'm so glad i know your name now! i loved the poem!!! I don't know what to say!
bye
Bronx

Be careful!
It's a jungle out there!

Lucky13ed
New Member

since 2000-03-25

Posts 1

5 posted 2000-03-25 12:02 PM

great job jess! i knew you had it in ya lol

keep up the awesome work and thanx for introducing me to this stellar place. hehe, hey can i use your poem in tL13? it'll be grand! lol later!

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

6 posted 2000-03-25 01:26 PM

Excellent poem full of passion and thought.

Peace,
Dark_kisses_within

dhuron
Member

since 2000-03-19

Posts 476

7 posted 2000-03-26 09:58 PM

Starry, wonder job. Just like Isis said, live your life to the fullest. Be happy, I'm sure that is what your guardian would want, to see you happy. Take Care

dhuron

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