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demonic~angel
Member

since 2000-03-11

Posts 54
Kansas

0 posted 2000-03-24 03:54 PM

Fear
©February 6, 2000
Misty Hawley

Darkness lurks at my doorstep
I hear blood-curdling screams
Somewhere in the night
Fear arises in my soul

I run in fear
Insanity explodes in my mind
A cloaked lurks behind
I look behind me I see his black arm reach for me

I scream in agony
The cloaked figure takes me into his arms
I try to empower him
His power is just too strong for me

As his head nears my face
I turn cold
I watch in fear
As takes his hands and reaches down my throat

I feel coldness surge throughout my body
He hands reach down further searching for my soul
He takes my soul and slowly pulls his hand out of my mouth
Black blood drips from the corners of my mouth

I see my soul in his hands blackened from the pain inside of me.

Messenger of fear in sight
Dark deception kills the light
~Metallica~

StarrGazer
Senior Member

since 2000-03-05

Posts 679
Texas

1 posted 2000-03-24 05:29 PM

DA- this was great !! ((((hugz)))) you always captur such strong emotiond so vividly

"A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning"
~Randal Jarrell~

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 2000-03-24 06:06 PM

Vivid indeed, and maybe a letter terror at seeing your blackened, wounded soul? I'm here to tell you the soul can again become healthy and blue. Blue being the colour of peace and beauty..
Well done!!!

There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

3 posted 2000-03-24 06:28 PM

Excellent poem and just as they have said....very vivid and very powerful.

Yours truly,
Angel

"The dark weight of the hour
humming madly
filling my head
with blood
and sorrow
and dread
the executioner's song."
-Jewel
"The Dark Bells"

~*Angel of Darkness*~

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-03-24 10:50 PM

wow wow you dream DARK my dear...
bone chiling imagery in this,
take care, jm

Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman

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