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demonic~angel Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 54Kansas |
Fear ©February 6, 2000 Misty Hawley Darkness lurks at my doorstep I hear blood-curdling screams Somewhere in the night Fear arises in my soul I run in fear Insanity explodes in my mind A cloaked lurks behind I look behind me I see his black arm reach for me I scream in agony The cloaked figure takes me into his arms I try to empower him His power is just too strong for me As his head nears my face I turn cold I watch in fear As takes his hands and reaches down my throat I feel coldness surge throughout my body He hands reach down further searching for my soul He takes my soul and slowly pulls his hand out of my mouth Black blood drips from the corners of my mouth I see my soul in his hands blackened from the pain inside of me. Messenger of fear in sight Dark deception kills the light ~Metallica~ |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
DA- this was great !! ((((hugz)))) you always captur such strong emotiond so vividly "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning" ~Randal Jarrell~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Vivid indeed, and maybe a letter terror at seeing your blackened, wounded soul? I'm here to tell you the soul can again become healthy and blue. Blue being the colour of peace and beauty.. Well done!!!  There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Excellent poem and just as they have said....very vivid and very powerful. Yours truly, Angel "The dark weight of the hour humming madly filling my head with blood and sorrow and dread the executioner's song." -Jewel "The Dark Bells" ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
wow wow you dream DARK my dear... bone chiling imagery in this, take care, jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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