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morteZ Junior Member
since 2000-03-16
Posts 17 |
This suffering of a hunger that I am unable to sate I drown myself in crocodile tears as in this descent of hunger, as I allow my bones to crack, and break. The bone caress's the flesh inside and dances down the nerves, frayed as they are pink and white caverns of agony the pain becomes tolerable, yet is allways there. The suffering of this hunger is mandatory for me don't be fooled by my fluidity of pain for my mask of smile can't hold much longer and now the suffering of my hunger has become the destiny. |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
this is only the second post i have read by you. fat sea being the first. i must say you have a talent that shines in few or many words. very nice work. i love too much, and not enough. |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
you certainly put the words together well. and great images, too. interesting (in a good way) work. jannel Dont wake the dead, Wake the dying, Don't change what you've said, Change what you're saying. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
wow you have really expressed your thoughts in this one SO very well...i felt this poem very good work, take care, jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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