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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Running trying to hide in the dark night from it. It chases me through the night for what reason I am lost Fatigued stumbling over a rock I fall Thud. Panic, Fear Fear for my life The Howls Oh the blood chilling howls Closer it comes oh so very close paralyzed with unutterable fear I see it... Cackling A look of Conquest within it’s eyes The Moon Becomes Eclipsed It moves toward me Quivering, my soul shrieks in terror It Plunges Deep Within my being Overwhelming Pain Beyond what the body can take My Soul, it’s target Screams with force Flooding the Astral Plane Transcending the folds of time Deathmatch. The Heart is ripped open, exposing it’s secrets The Soul; pinned Forced to feel every excruciating ounce of pain Plunging into the core ,like a drill, Searching neglecting the screams of agony Tortured at the brink of death It reveals itself The dark cloak fading Light radiating outward It is my conscience Purging the evil, starting anew and erasing the past |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Wonderful poem dhuron...I love the depth and power in this...Well done my friend.. Forever yours, Angel "The dark weight of the hour humming madly filling my head with blood and sorrow and dread the executioner's song." -Jewel "The Dark Bells" ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
very cool. i like the incoherent sentence fragments. scary stuff  jannel Dont wake the dead, Wake the dying, Don't change what you've said, Change what you're saying. |
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DragonFire New Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 7 |
Hi Dan, This is a very powerful and haunting poem. One of your best...but then you know me*S* I happen to think all of your poems are the best! *hugs* keep smiling hun always, cath |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
wow..this is full of chilling imagery... you expressed your thoughts with power in this..very dark and eerie...way cool too  great job...jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
awesome!!! i love the way the last stanza just completely shifts the poem! that's so cool! haunting!!! but hopeful!! the whole realization that what's happening is good and necessary! deep concept! loved this! |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Glad you all liked this lil ole poem of mine DE-thank you so much Jannel- thanks glad it was a bit scarey Fire-*blushing* oh hush...*S* Janet and Aiden I am so glad ya'll like it so much.  The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Dhuron~ this is great! I liked the ending best! -SEA |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Oh to start anew, what a glorious sight. loved the fast pace. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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