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Body, Mind, and Soul
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Body, Mind, and Soul |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Fragile body Fragile pieces of a former whole Put together by lessons learned Weaving a spell in which to hold All the pieces in the warmth as one Broken mind Broken thoughts that used to shape A form and direction About each, the other would drape Themselves in mutual polarity Tortured soul Tortured wings that fly no more Bearing no resemblance to those which Flew so proudly before, Now burned by the envious sun Changed forevermore |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Fragile body Fragile pieces of a former whole Put together by lessons learned Weaving a spell in which to hold All the pieces in the warmth as one ------------------- well, you had me on the title alone...  very nice... I REALLY like this one--body, mind and soul...*S* stalking all of you... your jm and you can say baby... baby can I hold you tonight maybe if told you the right words... at the right time, you'd be mine... baby can I hold you tonight... tracy chapman |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
Tortured soul Tortured wings that fly no more Bearing no resemblance to those which Flew so proudly before, Now burned by the envious sun Changed forevermore ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ i know the feeling....but, WE WILL FLY AGAIN! take care *hug* Broken Wings  "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Aah JML this was wonderful, great imagery, I felt the pain, hon, take my hand, we'll walk towards the light again.. Bravo There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
wonderful work. i think we all have been there before, and will unfortunately be there again from time to time. seems the story of life. i love too much, and not enough. |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
i loved the way you fit this together. very nice work. |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
The image of the burnt wings reminded me of that myth about the guy who flew too close to the sun..and I think the idea of burnt wings was a great one...seemed to bring together the thoughts... I enjoyed reading this Tess "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two bodies." -Aristotle |
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