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A Journey |
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mcclain Junior Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 13 |
A piece of me A journey in the Black Haven which lies beneath the dark forest Full of welcoming, warm rivers of Acceptance Yearning to cradle you A piece of you Through veins full of white thunder Waiting under a willow tree Drips fall across my thirsty lips Blackness flickers with flashing thunder A complete us Strobe lights weaken to a sun-filled room Where dry winds caress sticky, tired kisses Rivers flow silently, willow trees blow softly And we fall into a dreamless sleep [This message has been edited by mcclain (edited 03-23-2000).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome to the dark forum McClain and take the dark journey with your new passions friends. Loved this first piece, emotional, great imagery etc. Welcome  There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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demonic~angel Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 54Kansas |
Awesome first post...Welcome to passions...Lovely imagery...*huggz* Messenger of fear in sight Dark deception kills the light ~Metallica~ |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! i loved the imagery of this poem! "the part of me...part of you...complete us" -- i love the way you did that! great job! looking forward to reading more of your work! |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
great work! I love how you used images within your words..dark forest..lighting...sending chills. Looking forward to future posts! Welcome dhuron |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
As darkness surrounds you and all around are lost When all creation hounds you and everyone looks cross Then my friend follow the words where they take you lies the truth your truth ____________________________________________ just my way of saying hello and welcome to dark passions Did you write the Book of Love And do you have faith in God above If the Bible tells you so Do you believe in rock 'n roll Can music save your mortal soul And can you teach me how to dance real slow |
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