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The thin line... |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
The thin line... Sometimes we wonder how close ones can hurt us? what we forget is that if they weren’t close...it wouldn’t hurt Strangers can do damage...they can’t cause pain or hurt... Sometimes we walk a thin line between love and hate...Between laughter and tears...happiness and sorrow...Success and failure...humility and pride... The thin line calls for courage and a lot of strength... It‘s not easy...but we all do it...think carefully...and you’ll see the most important times of our lives we are walking the thin line... Some “people” may touch us hearts...some “one” may touch our souls...but it takes an angel to touch our spirits...they don’t come with a halo on their heads for us to look out for...we just have to feel...them around...on higher grounds... There’s a difference between waiting and hoping... When you hope you go on...when you wait your time is standing still It’s a choice you make...but remember this... The finer things are all too few...but they shine... All the way through...so keep your eyes closed if you must but keep your heart open... < !signature--> you don't have to understand completely..to love completely... remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday... Avanti Rao [This message has been edited by AVANTI (edited 03-25-2000).] |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
What you say in this poem is so true. only those that are close to us can really hurt us..and what strangers do can only help us learn and grow...yes it is true, life is a thin line we walk everyday and hope is what keeps us walking. Great Job! take care, Broken Wings  "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Avanti great job this was absolutely beautiful!!! "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning" ~Randal Jarrell~ |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I love reading poems like this...full of wisdom and beauty...well done Avanti. Yours truly, Angel "The dark weight of the hour humming madly filling my head with blood and sorrow and dread the executioner's song." -Jewel "The Dark Bells" ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sometimes we wonder how close ones can hurt us? what we forget is that if they weren’t close...it wouldn’t hurt Strangers can do damage...they can’t cause pain or hurt... ------------------- There’s a difference between waiting and hoping... When you hope you go on...when you wait your time is standing still ------------------ where do you get all your wisdom my poetice pal...this is so YOU!!!!! and SO perfect...I love the way your mind works... thanks for sharing you grace... I dig your manifesto  take care, jm and you can say baby... baby can I hold you tonight maybe if told you the right words... at the right time, you'd be mine... baby can I hold you tonight... tracy chapman |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
"...but keep your heart open" Very true Avanti, very true ! I liked this a lot !  |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Avanti, excellent! Your poem speaks with wisdom of the ages, Makes me think about hoping and waiting..and relizing that I am waiting...thanks for your work and insight! Dhuron |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
thankyou all who thought i was wise to write some of these thoughts... thanx janet...for always seeing the me in my words...((((((((hug))))))) se you around... and munda... ((((((((hug))))))))as always... you don't have to understand completely..to love completely... remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday..Avanti Rao |
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mcclain Junior Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 13 |
This is charming and profoundly true. Great work! |
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