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~My Tears~ |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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A tear falls down my cheek As I just sit here and cry Wondering can I get out Or am I left here to die Wondering if you can see me So you see my sorrow and my pain? I scream for some assistance But nothing is ever to gain I curl up into a ball Hoping that I may be found But I doubt that will ever happen For others are scared to walk my ground. I do not love you for being perfect..... I love you for being perfect for me!! |
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morteZ Junior Member
since 2000-03-16
Posts 17 |
'others are scared to walk my ground'... That is such a great line, it evokes many thoughts and emotions for me. I'll look out for some more of your work. |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
The desperation in this poem just jumps out and grabs you by the neck. Don't give up, someone will hear you. take care, Broken Wings  "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
emotionally beautiful poem...yes, the last line was perfection... take care, jm and you can say baby... baby can I hold you tonight maybe if told you the right words... at the right time, you'd be mine... baby can I hold you tonight... tracy chapman |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
no imagination left for me today walter well done though like much Did you write the Book of Love And do you have faith in God above If the Bible tells you so Do you believe in rock 'n roll Can music save your mortal soul And can you teach me how to dance real slow |
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