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Stephen Jones
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since 2000-02-26
Posts 53


0 posted 2000-03-21 12:34 PM


Of Darker Views and Brighter Pleasures

Morbidity, insanity,
or outpour of profanity,
the darker views of life
some will prefer.
But I must wonder why
as I behold a grandoise sky
whose sphere of light
much brighter pleasures will confer.

Just a thought.
SDJ 3/2000

© Copyright 2000 Stephen Douglas Jones - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-03-21 02:07 AM


your thoughts are perfect...great work...
were all looking for that light,
take care, jm

 and you can say baby...
baby can I hold you tonight
maybe if told you the right words...
at the right time,
you'd be mine...
baby can I hold you tonight...
tracy chapman



JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2000-03-21 05:45 AM


Very good thoughts Stephen..I often times think that myself..but not in those exact words..and yet I seem to fluctuate back and forth.  James
demonic~angel
Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 54
Kansas
3 posted 2000-03-21 02:18 PM


Great thoughts...Wonderfully written...Your words seem to speak to me...



 Messenger of fear in sight
Dark deception kills the light
~Metallica~

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
4 posted 2000-03-21 03:52 PM


Thinking is a dangerous pass time of mine and I've thought about this more times than I can remember...but never before had I seen it worded so wonderfully.  

             Yours truly,
                Angel


 "The dark weight of the hour
humming madly
filling my head
with blood
and sorrow
and dread
the executioner's song."
-Jewel
"The Dark Bells"

~*Angel of Darkness*~


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 2000-03-21 08:37 PM


Deep ponderings here Stephen!!  I have wondered the same thing myself once or twice.
But I too couldn't have put it as good as this!! Bravo  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
6 posted 2000-03-21 09:10 PM


Great thoughts, Stephen.  Don't lose sight of the light.

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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