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Yesterday, Today, Tomorrow, and Forever
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Yesterday, Today, Tomorrow, and Forever |
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Bronx Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84Oviedo, Florida, U.S. |
Yesterday, Today, Tomorrow, and Forever Yesterday we were just friends, You liked me I liked you, We were happy, Life was perfect, We played around, Talked to each other, Life is great, but... Today you told me you love me, You love me, I guess I love you... We are happy... Life is perfect...but different We kissed...and it felt surprisingly good, We didn't speak we just did what came naturally, Life is WONDERFUL! but... Tomorrow that may all end, You'll hate me, I'll love you, We'll be apart, Life will be messed up, We'll get on each other's nerves, We won't speak to each other, Life stinks, but... No matter what happens tomorrow, Or what else happens today, We'll always and forever have Yesterday, Yesterday will forever be mine and yours, Remember it well, I know I will, We had a brief moment of...something special, Friendship, Today I love you And you love me, But if anything happens... We still have Yesterday... Today, Tomorrow, And... Forever, by Bronx Be careful! It's a jungle out there! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Bronx, my God this is so beautiful, emotional, yearning and fearful. This could be in a blue mountain card!! You should think about entering it!! Wonderful work  May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
WOW! Bronx this is fantastic! I've been having all these same feelings for a special online friend and its scary to see them in words. Who let you in my head!! LOL Thank -You take care, Broken Wings "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Bronx This was so expressive and moving! Brought a tear to my eye, as it made me think of a certain special someone in my life. I could relate so well to the feelings you have described here. But you did more than just described, you allowed all of us to in a way experience the emotions you are going through. Thank you Take care, AMY ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Bronx, well said!! I agree with Isis, blue mountain arts for sure!!! I really relate to how you feel. You just never know what will happen. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
yeah bronx is back...lol this is great..I loved the use of pondering the future and mixing it with reflections of the past...creative work here. take care, jm and you can say baby... baby can I hold you tonight maybe if told you the right words... at the right time, you'd be mine... baby can I hold you tonight... tracy chapman |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
This is beautiful! Sad and true...like I said beautiful...ya never know about the future until it's here... "Sheltered from the world you scare yourself from the rain...away from the dark sickning fog that so stumblest unto your heart...for no true poet holds loves hand..."-TanAngel |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
very nice. i loved the progression. love may only be for a moment, but memories are forever. jannel Dont wake the dead, Wake the dying, Don't change what you've said, Change what you're saying. |
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Bronx Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84Oviedo, Florida, U.S. |
wow- I never thought I'd get this many positive replies. I have Isis to thank for that. Yes, Janet Marie I'm back and I'm glad to be back. There are so many new and very talented people here at Passion's. I'm so thrilled that we're still here and thriving! I would like to thank Isis and all of you who agree with her. I was very surprised to see that you guys liked this one. I thought it was a bit...a bit...well it's not a favorite of mine. If anyone knows how you could submit something like that to Blue Mountain I would be very greatful... bye Bronx Be careful! It's a jungle out there! |
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