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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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In the middle of the night Your voice speaks to me out of a brilliant light Calling to me like a beautiful siren's song Comforting my heart across this distance long To your melody I add the harmony of my heart No need to tell me the words, I know where to start I have sung this song all my life, it seems This is so wonderful, it can't be real, it must be the stuff of dreams My eyes begin to flicker and I awake And that's when my heart begins to break For instead of sharing with you my song, my own I awake to find that I am very alone. ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oh sven this ended so sad...but the sentiment is beautiful... I bet I know the perfect mistress to sing you a sweet lullaby  take care, jm and you can say baby... baby can I hold you tonight maybe if told you the right words... at the right time, you'd be mine... baby can I hold you tonight... tracy chapman |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
i love the imagery in this poem. the allusion to the sirens, the musical melodies and harmonies, i can almost hear it myself and then i feel that awful ache of loneliness when i realize i was dreaming right along with you. beautiful yet sad...wonderful. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Very sad....there is a sense of deep longing here. Very well written. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes Sven I too know the wonderful comfort that internet friends provide and also the longing to be face to face in their presence. James |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Dear Sven, It's nice to know you love my voice and my singing that much hon. It's nice to know I can still effect people so with music alone  May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all.. . Janet.. .so do I. . . Aiden... glad that you can hear it. . . LW, the longing in my heart. . . jmlee. . .more than just an internet friend... Isis, not just your voice... so much more than that. . . -------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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