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Broken
Member

since 2000-03-12

Posts 271
The woods

0 posted 2000-03-17 05:57 PM

RELEASE IS PEACE

I stand alone
I feel the loneliness grow
Slowly it fills my empty body
Underneath the skin
I feel the pain begin
And in my blood
It starts to spread
My bones break
So I fall

You expect me to smile
And talk
But how can I
When I don`t know the words to say

I`ve felt you pulling me down
For oh so long
Pulling me down
Over and over
Pushing me out again
Turned your backs
Just freezing me out
Again and again

I can`t take it anymore
This it I`ve become
And your fingers point
So I live in shadows, darkness
Without a light in sight

"I`m alive!" I cry
But I don`t know what it means
The crying for sympathy
Prayers and moans
Unheard by gods deaf ears
And every day
Pieces of me fly away

All considered
I chose eternity over this
Can`t you see it`s easier for me
To get finished than ever feel whole again
If you can`t understand
Judge me nighter
And don`t you know
You can`t kill what`s never lived
No hope no fear
Release is peace

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

1 posted 2000-03-17 06:34 PM

Wonderful poem here Broken...makes me think...I like that

And it is so very true...keep them coming..

              Yours truly,
                 Angel

"The dark weight of the hour
humming madly
filling my head
with blood
and sorrow
and dread
the executioner's song."
-Jewel
"The Dark Bells"

~*Angel of Darkness*~

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 2000-03-17 11:56 PM

Wonderful work and reflections here, I just hope it's a poem and you aren't really feeling this way? Sorry have to ask, for I care about you and all the other members of the dark forum. *hugs*

May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-03-18 10:40 AM

another painfully perfect poem Broken,
the last two lines were so perfect.
very well expressed.
take care, jm

Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
jackson browne

Aiden Kelly
Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 148
Ft. Wayne, IN USA

4 posted 2000-03-19 12:22 PM

reminds me of the other poem -- "Broken". well written and a big WOW!! goes out to you! i hope you are hanging in there, chica! life does get better it really does! but you are right...there is such peace in release.

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