Dark Poetry #1 |
My Only Crime !!! |
Chico Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 67 |
My only crime !!! I know I'd die for you; if just given the chance. just hoping that I might; catch the slightest little glance. And in that last instant; before life and death. That you would be there present, To hear my last breath. And that on you lips; Would be my name. As your tear drips; on my quivering frame. That you would hold me tight; And ask me why. And tell me It's not right; That I should die. But in the wanning time; I would Smile and be tough. Knowing that my only crime; Was not loving you enough... I love you Avei... |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Chico, this was very beautiful and touching !! keep up the good work ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~ |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
Beautiful...and warming...I feel this way WAY too much! I hope you are noticed without having to take the place of this person...That you seem to love sooooo much... "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
A hard lesson to learn but you appear to have become a better person for it. That is all we can hope for... Well done May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
i like this! it's amazing what love can motivate us to do! |
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