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Shallow little light....
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Shallow little light.... |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
is it me or is it miserable sitting in the dark with my life turned off again its irresistable...a pure delight to bother.. to pester.. you basking and bathing in your good for nothing shallow little light... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
the title is what drew me to this poem, and boy am i glad i read. this was simply fantastic! i don't like the dark either my friend. very well expressed piece you have wrote. thanks so much for sharing, amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Shallow little light, Light of all light, Comforter to all, On a cold and stormy night. Light of all light, Friend to the lonely, Shallow little light, The one and only. Like your poem, unique and comforting May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
another enjoyable read. you certainly have a talent for expressing so much in so few words. well done. i love too much, and not enough. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
so much emotion spoke in so few perfect words...another great one jac. take care, jm Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be jackson browne |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
amazing how such simple words can have such a powerful effect. you have earned a big, huge WOW!!! |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Concise and Powerful! Well done..Well done indeed |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
conversational tone (is it just me...?) was very very cool. and the part about turning off life was a great play on words. liked it. jannel Dont wake the dead, Wake the dying, Don't change what you've said, Change what you're saying. |
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