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demonic~angel
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since 2000-03-11
Posts 54
Kansas

0 posted 2000-03-16 11:18 PM


Today...

It comes harder
It comes faster
More shaking
Turmoil around me

Through my eyes I see him
In my head I hear him

They couldn't reach me
I am losing control
Going insane is becomeing a reality
Losing the battle

Through my eyes I see him
In my head I hear him

Tomorrow...

Will it happen again?
Will I be closer to losing my sanity?
Am I going to be committed again?
Will it all end?

Scared of what tomorrow holds
Never knowing what I will do
Slowly losing control
Not understanding any more



 Carpe Diem...

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devinmaria
Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130
Middletown, Ohio
1 posted 2000-03-17 12:32 PM


ahhh there has been many a time i felt as i i was going absolutely insane.  whether it be over a guy, or a job, or school, or friends, its absolutely nerve rattling, so i get your picture.  nice thoughts.

aimee


 Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
2 posted 2000-03-17 04:28 PM


This is very good demonic~angel....I understand what it is that you feel and you expressed it perfectly.

                Yours truly,
                   Angel


 "The dark weight of the hour
humming madly
filling my head
with blood
and sorrow
and dread
the executioner's song."
-Jewel
"The Dark Bells"

~*Angel of Darkness*~



Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-03-18 10:22 AM


wow... i love the line...
"going insane is becoming a reality"
it made the poem for me...
well written piece. jm

 Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
jackson browne



danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
4 posted 2000-03-18 10:24 AM


well done indeed. i could relate more than i would like to.  

 i love too much, and not enough.

Aiden Kelly
Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148
Ft. Wayne, IN USA
5 posted 2000-03-19 12:11 PM


wow!  you are good, my friend! i must honestly admit that though i can't put it into words i can relate much more than i care to admit!!! and here i thought i was the only one who just went insane!! ;o)
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