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demonic~angel Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 54Kansas |
Today... It comes harder It comes faster More shaking Turmoil around me Through my eyes I see him In my head I hear him They couldn't reach me I am losing control Going insane is becomeing a reality Losing the battle Through my eyes I see him In my head I hear him Tomorrow... Will it happen again? Will I be closer to losing my sanity? Am I going to be committed again? Will it all end? Scared of what tomorrow holds Never knowing what I will do Slowly losing control Not understanding any more Carpe Diem... |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
ahhh there has been many a time i felt as i i was going absolutely insane. whether it be over a guy, or a job, or school, or friends, its absolutely nerve rattling, so i get your picture. nice thoughts. aimee Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
This is very good demonic~angel....I understand what it is that you feel and you expressed it perfectly. Yours truly, Angel "The dark weight of the hour humming madly filling my head with blood and sorrow and dread the executioner's song." -Jewel "The Dark Bells" ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
wow... i love the line... "going insane is becoming a reality" it made the poem for me... well written piece. jm Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be jackson browne |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
well done indeed. i could relate more than i would like to.  i love too much, and not enough. |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
wow! you are good, my friend! i must honestly admit that though i can't put it into words i can relate much more than i care to admit!!! and here i thought i was the only one who just went insane!! ;o) |
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