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| Dark Poetry #1 |
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My Muse Has Deserted Me |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
My muse has deserted me Never before have I been so blind As darkness fills the void in my mind Not until I am deserted by she, Who used to be my best friend Now she’s a million miles away And I lose my grip every day Is this the beginning or the end? Just another one With wheels come undone No more races to run In the setting of the sun My muse has deserted me And took with her my thoughts Leaving only traces of my heart Memories of the one I used to be No more dark spectre mistress No more flowers of grey No more words to say And ignorance is not bliss It feels like a heart attack As if my spirit wracked, I know I’ll never get it back I know now there is only black My muse has deserted me |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Wonderful JML...I really like your descriptions in this of what you felt afterwards...  Yours truly, Angel "The dark weight of the hour humming madly filling my head with blood and sorrow and dread the executioner's song." -Jewel "The Dark Bells" ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
jml this is good writing..hang in there and be strong. New blessings await you in your journey. James |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Enchantress, thanks. James, I'm hanging... i'm hanging. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Hang on indeed hon, you should find a muse that'll never leave you, ie a friend like I did. They will always be there for you. Felt your pain in this one, sorry hon *hugs* May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JML~ this is so sad. Beautiful emotion.-SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And took with her my thoughts Leaving only traces of my heart Memories of the one I used to be No more dark spectre mistress No more flowers of grey No more words to say And ignorance is not bliss It feels like a heart attack As if my spirit wracked, I know I’ll never get it back I know now there is only black -------------- are you trying to make me cry... your so sensitve and sweet...let me help you find your muse...(smile) stalking you always, jm Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be jackson browne |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
JML... Your pain and agony show in this one all too well. . . losing your muse can indeed be quite painful. . . I have learned that there were 9 muses. . .so why can't I have that many? And they don't have to be people either (as some may think!!) Perhaps, she wasn't your muse. . . a muse stays with you. . . even after the loss. . . Powerful writing my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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