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It Was My Heart
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It Was My Heart |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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I watched you smiling don't you see my pain? It's in my eyes~ What my voice can't explain I talked to you but never got to say If you'd ask I wouldn't go away You wished me love, luck, and all the happiness of life for I was to become another man's wife I watched you walk away can't you hear my shout? My lips didn't move~ It was my heart crying out. -SEA- |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oooh SEA i love this poem of quiet desperation...really well written and expressed...why cant we find the words...well we find them in our poetry though...thank goodness (smile) take care, jm Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be jackson browne |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
great job SEA, very beautifully done  it hurts sometimes when we can't get what we really want in this world but life always have some good and bad ,we just have life with it even when it hurts alot ..... |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Janet~ thanks,(the desperation was so quiet, he never heard, all those years ago....) Creature~ life is VERY good now  ~thank you~-SEA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sea this is touching..sounds like an opportunity missed...hopefully new opportunities blessed you in your life. In this past year I have looked back with regret at a missed opportunity...one in which the chapter is now closed. James |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
yes....i can realte to the desperation and perhaps regret? It is painful i know when we second guess ourselves...but block it out like i do. LOL The mind is mightier than the heart...*L* Good poem SEA. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ You got it, it was an opportunity missed. I looked back yesterday and thought about it. I can't change the past,and I'm ok with that. Things happen( or don't happen) for a reason. Yes, new opportunities have come in my life and I feel so lucky. Thanks for getting me.  JML~ glad you liked -SEA |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
"its in the eyes, what the voice can't explain". I liked this line. So true! Nice work SEA. |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Help me leave your love my friend I cannot escape you i cant pretend a million stars explode in my head When your not near and in another mans bed My heart aggrees with the sentiment i feel in your poem Did you write the Book of Love And do you have faith in God above If the Bible tells you so Do you believe in rock 'n roll Can music save your mortal soul And can you teach me how to dance real slow |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Danny~ I'm so glad you liked this! Walter~ You blew me away. I wonder if that is how my best friend felt? He never said. I was too afraid to ask.(rejection-ugh)Thank you for this reply. You touched me. -SEA |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
SEA- "It was my heart crying out." Great way to end this wondeful piece of love and pain. I'm glad to hear things are going well now. Joy |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Gaining strength there my friend, good to see!! This was lovely and powerful.. May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
SEA...I can relate. Lost love is indeed a hard thing to bear. Unfortunately, once the opportunity is gone....it is gone forever. Truly a great poem!!!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
SEA. . . we can only take things as they come. . .you have captured this well. . . and you're right. . . things happen for a reason, we don't get to see them right away, but happen they do. . .we can only learn from them and move on. . . ------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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