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TanAngel
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0 posted 2000-03-15 12:59 PM



Withering away at a cold hard world
My life as an actress must come to a stop
Take me away to my trailor lined with gold
Get me out of this scene!
I don't enjoy my character I want the clutches of reality
Love me for me not the mask I sheild myself with
Let me not live the lie I burried myself in...


 "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

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ill_tactics
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 149

1 posted 2000-03-15 01:48 PM


That was a neat poem, I do like the mask metaphor of an actress.  We do put on scenes, but most of us dont like starring in our own lives, so they take the part of someonelse.  Hope to read more work in the future.  Much love, One love PEACE  

CUT!!!!!!!!!!!!

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2 posted 2000-03-16 01:30 AM


TA~ I want to yell "cut!" No kidding, I know just how this feels-excellent poem-SEA
Broken
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3 posted 2000-03-16 02:45 PM


Beautiful, I can relate to the feelings you share. I enjoy the darkness in your poems.
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