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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
DEAD...... can anyone hear my cries i'm lying deep deep inside my words are not yet heard read every single word listen to my heart in this passage i impart breath life into my poems unless I will go home...unknown lifeless, motionless, without emotion DEAD....... other poetry found here, see PITCH BLACK, and My darkness something, I forgot....lol  |
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atslanta Junior Member
since 2000-03-10
Posts 13 |
Ill, nice. short and too the point. I think that sometimes things read with more impact when they are short and too the point......this seemed to me to be complete and nicely packaged. Keep them coming. I enjoyed it. A |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Ill Tactics - breathe life into your feeble heart. This was so heartfelt, those cries for help. Bravo!! If you need to talk you know where to email me May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
very well done ill_tactics short brief straight to the point a good one ..... |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
good job by the way [This message has been edited by CrEaTuRe (edited 03-14-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
so much emotion expressed in so few words... very good work wiht this piece ILL... take care, jm |
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