Dark Poetry #1 |
My great dark beyond...... |
ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
Everyone take my hand think of the darkest feeling i'm gonna take you to a land just a matter of beleiving Dont be scared of whats ahead you feel the wind beneath us no, youre not dead you see the silhouettes of dark creatures Can you feel the coldness nipping at your skin would you like to take a rest or onward shall we begin See the shadows of them all creepin down below now if youre gonna fall pain and danger you will bestow This land is dark with a lot of wonders something like an amusement park but in evil you will plunder Down Down into deep thought into a never ending sleep like this drug I bought I think this you should keep Were almost there can you see the darkness lot of people there no more no less In the shadows of the dark their minds think a like their words leave a mark and struggle with a fight This place I call my home and you my sibling will never be alone Dark Passions is really pleasing....... WELCOME ONE AND ALL TO THE DARKEST OF PLACES, WITH THE BRIGHTEST OF FACES.....Dark Passions [This message has been edited by ill_tactics (edited 03-13-2000).] |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
gosh, you make us sound so scary! (haha ) makes me think about the old saying, "misery loves company." i very much enjoyed the read. i love too much, and not enough. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Almost made me think I was reading some thing I had written.....I like this much and the way it is written, as if you are really taking some one the joureny in grand..... Love the read as well!!! There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
Muchos Gracias! Much love, one love, PEACE |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Ill this was suberb....creative and imaginative and a perfect tribute to our "Home-DARK-Home" very well done... take care jm Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be jackson browne |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Our Dark Home, Our Horror yet our Sanctuary!!! May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
great post ill. especailly those last few lines. dark passions, bright faces, definitely!! aimee Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
great job !!!!!! I really liked this one , feelings so true haven't been here for long but I feel a kind of connection with the people here it's a nice feeling knowing I can go somewhere and be understood ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I_T~ Great poem for this Dark home!-SEA |
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