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ill_tactics
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 149


0 posted 2000-03-13 08:30 PM


Everyone take my hand
think of the darkest feeling
i'm gonna take you to a land
just a matter of beleiving

Dont be scared of whats ahead
you feel the wind beneath us
no, youre not dead
you see the silhouettes of dark creatures

Can you feel the coldness
nipping at your skin
would you like to take a rest
or onward shall we begin

See the shadows of them all
creepin down below
now if youre gonna fall
pain and danger you will bestow

This land is dark
with a lot of wonders
something like an amusement park
but in evil you will plunder

Down Down into deep thought
into a never ending sleep
like this drug I bought
I think this you should keep

Were almost there
can you see the darkness
lot of people there
no more no less

In the shadows of the dark
their minds think a like
their words leave a mark
and struggle with a fight

This place I call my home
and you my sibling
will never be alone
Dark Passions is really pleasing.......


WELCOME ONE AND ALL TO THE DARKEST OF PLACES, WITH THE BRIGHTEST OF FACES.....Dark Passions



[This message has been edited by ill_tactics (edited 03-13-2000).]

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danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
1 posted 2000-03-14 12:32 PM


gosh, you make us sound so scary! (haha )
makes me think about the old saying, "misery loves company." i very much enjoyed the read.


 i love too much, and not enough.

a-alibaster
Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

2 posted 2000-03-14 08:20 AM


Almost made me think I was reading some thing I had written.....I like this much and the way it is written, as if you are really taking some one the joureny in grand.....
Love the read as well!!!

 There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul...
a-alibaster

ill_tactics
Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149

3 posted 2000-03-14 12:07 PM


Muchos Gracias!  Much love, one love, PEACE
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-03-14 04:45 PM


Ill this was suberb....creative and imaginative and a perfect tribute to our
"Home-DARK-Home"
very well done...
take care jm

 Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
jackson browne



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 2000-03-14 08:30 PM


Our Dark Home, Our Horror yet our Sanctuary!!!  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


devinmaria
Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130
Middletown, Ohio
6 posted 2000-03-15 10:05 AM


great post ill.  especailly those last few lines.  dark passions, bright faces, definitely!!

aimee


 Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica

StarrGazer
Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas
7 posted 2000-03-15 12:38 PM


great job !!!!!! I really liked this one , feelings so true haven't been here for long but I feel a kind of connection with the people here it's a nice feeling knowing I can go somewhere and be understood  

 ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~



SEA
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with you
8 posted 2000-03-16 01:00 AM


I_T~ Great poem for this Dark home!-SEA
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