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Dark Poetry #1

Loved today, gone tomorrow

ill_tactics
Member

since 2000-02-11

Posts 149

0 posted 2000-03-13 07:15 PM

I called him my best friend
ofcourse he still is now
all he did was pretend
and snuck in I love you, somehow

How could I be so blind
and caught up in his charm
I just didn't see the little signs
that triggered the alarm

He still loves me
but in another way
tho' he never calls me
when he use to everyday

I packed my bags
and traveled far for him
but eventually came home sad
no, not this, never again

I opened my heart
his love he placed within it
but like a thief in the dark
crept away slowly with it

Friends is what he calls this now
he shouldn't have said I LOVE YOU
then all of a sudden throw in the towel
now I'm standing here like a fool...

[This message has been edited by ill_tactics (edited 03-13-2000).]

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

1 posted 2000-03-13 07:24 PM

This is wonderful ill....I can feel your pain...or atleast an echo of what lies within...

Yours truly,
Angel

"The dark weight of the hour
humming madly
filling my head
with blood
and sorrow
and dread
the executioner's song."
-Jewel
"The Dark Bells"

~*Angel of Darkness*~

virgil baichoo
New Member

since 2000-03-09

Posts 8

2 posted 2000-03-14 12:20 PM

this is a well written piece. Dont give up hope...we learn from the past which helps us in the future. I do not think he deserved you anyway.
onelove
virgil

Anthony
Junior Member

since 2000-03-13

Posts 12

3 posted 2000-03-14 04:02 PM

loved the lines
"I opened my heart
his love he placed within it
but like a thief in the dark
crept away slowly with it"
But the whole poem is beutifully sad

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