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| Dark Poetry #1 |
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Nightmare! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California 
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NIGHTMARE! < !signature-->There I lay, ever endeared. Alas, all in life once feared. In perfect calm, now swept away To subtle shade of yesterday. Magic musing in the thought Of all I loved in life for naught! Form hell's lifelong captivity A spirit now forever free. Pain left behind, I grace the sky, On new found wings of death I fly. To rise above a world condemned Of would be loves who called me "friend". A specter of blackness portrayed, I come to you in visions frayed. To lay my palm cold to you chest That never again, may you rest! Lo, by every dark dreaming night Shall wings of this demon take flight. Upon Sanity's walls I creep To steal all peace that comes by sleep. To feast upon your bleeding soul, To break you of all self control! Forgiveness bless the fool who dare, Lo, for the rest - Call me Nightmare! Michael Anderson For all behind was dark and drear, And all before was night and fear. How many hours of night or day In those suspended pangs I lay, I could not tell; I scarcely knew If this were human breath I drew. Lord Byron [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 03-15-2000).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sad Michael, but no sorry I couldn't call you a nightmare, but a little piece of heaven here on Earth. When will you believe that?? *hugs* I'm online now so Icq me my Liege.. May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
i have been visited by this demon of which you write. but, not once did it speak so eloquently. so it couldn't have been you.  |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Very, very good Michael...but just as they have said...I don't think that you could ever be called a nightmare. Atleast not by me.  Yours truly, Angel "The dark weight of the hour humming madly filling my head with blood and sorrow and dread the executioner's song." -Jewel "The Dark Bells" ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Very good as always...how do you write so good, so much? |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
it's a good one but i doubt that a person that write so full of emotions can be a nightmare.....well done dear...... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
There I lay, ever endeared. Alas, all in life once feared. In perfect calm, now swept away To subtle shade of yesterday. Magic musing in the thought Of all I loved in life for naught! Form hell's lifelong captivity A spirit now forever free. ------------ To feast upon your bleeding soul, To break you of all self control! Forgiveness bless the fool who dare, Lo, for the rest - Call me Nightmare! ------------ I choose to call you what I always call you... amazing...gifted...talented...awesome... poet extraordinaire... (tell me when you want me to stop)  take care, jm Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be jackson browne |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Thank you all for the kind replies. Michael |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
TINGLE DOWN MY SPINE!!!!! That was soo good. I love reading your poems, hope to read more soon. Dont you just hate nightmares, I had one the other night....wait thats just my life. Much love, One love PEACE |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Michael~ I doubt anyone would call you a nightmare. This is packed with power, loved it!-SEA |
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