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Andreja Nikki
Junior Member

since 2000-03-06

Posts 18

0 posted 2000-03-12 09:07 PM

The sound of a heart breaking
Like glass shattering on a linoleum floor
The hollow echo
Of a slamming door
The devastation
Of a heartbroken cry
And the remembrance
That stirs a sigh.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-03-12 11:27 PM

emotional strong poem...well expressed in so few words....you sum up the pain...
a sound I know all too well.
take care, jm

Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
jackson browne

ill_tactics
Member

since 2000-02-11

Posts 149

2 posted 2000-03-13 05:17 PM

That hits close to home. Once again that feeling appears, the cry of my heart rings in my ear...... Nice poem, good job. Much love, One love, PEACE

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

3 posted 2000-03-13 05:31 PM

This is absolutely beautiful....so very well expressive of a broken heart and so much with so little...

           Yours truly,
             Angel



"The dark weight of the hour
humming madly
filling my head
with blood
and sorrow
and dread
the executioner's song."
-Jewel
"The Dark Bells"

~*Angel of Darkness*~

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2000-03-13 10:34 PM

Andreja~ this is so so so true. Great expressions.

-SEA

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

5 posted 2000-03-14 12:16 PM

Such a painful time for anyone, and looking back you do sometimes sigh when thinking about them and the whys of it all.. Well done

May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2000-03-14 09:26 PM

Rememberance is a haunting mistress. . .very well done. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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