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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-09-27 03:56 AM

It's own razor edge carved out my tongue,
by rights it should have been torn.
My words have me by my fingers strung,
with no one my death to mourn.

The ashes of madness blind my eyes,
forcing from them tears of blood.
Feeding upon me are swarms of flies,
clinging to me like dried mud.

Blind rage slipped my neck into the noose,
spite brought me to the gallows.
With love of life I declared a truce,
death my sacrifice hallows.

Clotting blood fills up my hollow mouth,
making silence my refrain.
Like birds in the fall fly to the south,
behind me I leave all pain.

Expectations have broken my bones,
shattering my soul as well.
I bruised my body by casting stones,
paving my own road to Hell.

As gangrenous rot eats at my mind,
all thought breaks down and decays.
To my lot in death I am resigned,
blessing the end of my days.

©1999 DreamEvil

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 1999-09-27 04:17 AM

Deeply dark and demented. Death would percieved a curse to most but for those who understand pain, indeed, death might seem a blessing. Wonderful, as always.

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Michael Anderson

Loneliness isn't in being alone;
Loneliness is alone in being.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 1999-09-27 05:06 AM

Soul-brother, WOW, T'is truly dark and brilliant to say the least.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

3 posted 1999-09-27 06:02 AM

Yet another great poem Dream. Sometimes I feellike I've earned my way into Hell, too. But sometimes it feels like Hell would be a welcome escape......

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Dragoness
Senior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 513

4 posted 1999-09-28 01:13 AM

Well written.When you get to hell....look for me.I'll still be there.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

5 posted 1999-09-28 03:53 AM

Pure sinister pain.
I am quickly becoming a fan.

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

6 posted 1999-09-28 07:36 AM

"...and hell's afraid I'll take over."
But I think it should worry about your reign my friend, true terror indeed.

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

7 posted 1999-09-28 10:16 AM

Totally Gothic Evil!!!

Jenny

Skyfyre
Senior Member

since 1999-08-15

Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap

8 posted 1999-10-23 10:26 PM

At what price prudence?

You know my feelings on this topic ... but it is nonetheless well expressed here.

--K.

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You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.

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