My Ache For The Blade (repost for Michael)

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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-09-20 12:59 PM

I cast longing glances
at the blade
awestruck by it's
simple beauty.
Each loving caress
of the constant
unchanging
hardness of the knife
moves my icy soul
to a more perfect
marriage
with the blade.
My lips touch
this loyal and
worthy
partner in what presages
an act of primal
union with this
jealous lover.
A quick,
unfeeling motion
grants me her
kiss
an ecstasy
of anticipated delight
brought on
by her gentle touch
that tenderly
sliced into my flesh.
With near
sexual release
her kiss
eases my ache
for the blade.

©1999 DreamEvil

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 1999-09-20 07:41 PM

Thank for getting this one back out and (In the Dark Room)where it truly shines. Wonderful work, Dream.

Michael

Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

2 posted 1999-09-20 08:34 PM

Wow.........that's all I can say

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 1999-09-20 09:33 PM

Wow , Soul-Brother, I'm in awe, excellent!!

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

4 posted 1999-09-21 01:37 AM

Ditto the above and always in awe.
I do not envy you your talent, I hope to learn from it. That is the highest form of praise I can think of, and you have earned it. A magnificent tribute!

gOdeSslOve
Junior Member

since 1999-09-12

Posts 23
Santa Clara CA

5 posted 1999-09-21 02:42 AM

This is just truly so beautiful, great job.

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AmOr y Salud,
gOddeSslOve

JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

6 posted 1999-09-21 07:30 AM

Magnificent!!!

Jenny

Lucie
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since 1999-06-20

Posts 1077
Houston

7 posted 1999-09-21 11:13 PM

Interesting... I never quite looked at a knife like this.

Julie Jordan Scott
Member

since 1999-09-19

Posts 146
Bakersfield, CA USA

8 posted 1999-10-18 01:12 AM

This poem is literally drenched with yearning for connection....it has drawn me in...asked me to look at it more deeply...not accept the words as only words, but as paint on a canvas or actors on a stage.

Hmmmmmm......truly provocative

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Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02

Posts 1121
NM

9 posted 1999-10-19 01:17 PM

wow, seems to be the best word for this, really intriguing, great work

Skyfyre
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since 1999-08-15

Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap

10 posted 1999-10-23 10:54 PM

A jealous lover indeed -- what was that about you being no good at free verse? I beg to differ, my friend. This was very effectively arranged; an engaging read.

--Kess

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You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.

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