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Dark Poetry #1

It's too late

Andreja Nikki
Junior Member

since 2000-03-06

Posts 18

0 posted 2000-03-12 04:05 PM

The sky is dark
There is no sun left
There is no joy left in my life
My sorrow swells
My sight becomes a blur
I cannot cry.

They wouldn't understand
They don't know the truth
I don't think they even care
Too caught up in their own lives.

My only hope is love,
My dear sweet love.

But even he too is fading into the clouds
It is only with him that I can cry
And these moments are too few
As we both grow weary.

I begin to fade
Slowly becoming one wit the clouds
No one notices,
No one cares,
But him.

And it's too late.

why not
Junior Member

since 2000-03-06

Posts 10

1 posted 2000-03-12 05:49 PM

Dear Andreja
This poem made me think - of the struggle of life and the surrender.
There are definitely situations in life,
where there doesn´t seem to be an appropriate solution. Who could claim to always be happy?

-interesting to experience the other side-

why not

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

2 posted 2000-03-13 01:29 PM

We all have highs and lows in our lives. Keep your spirits up. You can count on things changing....they always do.
Good expression in your writing. You have a poets touch I think.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2000-03-13 09:50 PM

Andreja~ sounds like you need a good cry alone and a good laugh with a friend. Things will change,as Danny said, they always do.-SEA

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