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Dark Poetry #1

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~Venus~
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 128

0 posted 2000-03-12 02:10 PM

I look
into the mystic waters
of my future.
I wade
in further.
Now the waters
are up to my knees.
The visions are
coming to me.
I hold my breath
and
plunge my head
beneath the cool waters.
my head throbs
from the premonitions,
but I swim on.
Down,
until I can take it
no more.
I frantically swim
up,
gasping for breath.
I swim to the edge,
and step out,
taking one last glance at
the mystic waters of my future.

~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

I'll be here...why? I'll
be waiting...for what?
'll be waiting for you
so...if you come here,
you'll find me...

I promise.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-03-12 02:16 PM

mystically perfect, nice work Venus

plunge my head
beneath the cool waters.
my head throbs
from the premonitions,
but I swim on.

like that line...
take care, jm

Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
jackson browne

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA