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Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri

0 posted 2000-03-12 01:30 AM



Your size 13 sneakers
Still lie on the bedroom floor
In memories I hear them plop
As you toss them off
On the hardwood floor.

Sometimes I imagine
I hear them squeak
As they run across
The basketball court

Then I remember
How many time your feet
Came racing home
Followed by the echo
Of your voice
"Mom, I'm home"

My motherly grip
Of your memories
Holds tight to your sneakers
Wishing you would direct me to who
You wanted me to give them to
Few could fill your size 13 shoes.

I could give them away
Yet they would always be
Lying on the dock of my heart
Just like you left them
When you walked barefoot
Right into heaven.




[This message has been edited by Septsong (edited 03-12-2000).]

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gypsyqlt
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 147
Bradford,Vt USA
1 posted 2000-03-12 06:56 AM


My God, how sad this is...I am a true believer that everything happens for a reason, that God has a plan for each of us.  I cannot, however, imagine what reason there could be to justify taking ones child !  You, too, are in my prayers.
Find Peace,
Jocelyn

Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
2 posted 2000-03-12 08:26 AM


My heart goes out to you. Being a Mother myself, I know the love for a child and I think it must be unbearable to suffer such loss. My prayers are with you.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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3 posted 2000-03-12 02:12 PM


sept,
this poem takes my words...im so sorry...
take care, jm

Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

4 posted 2000-03-12 04:08 PM


Tragic...that is the word that springs to mind...

and quietly graceful.

K

 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath

JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
5 posted 2000-03-12 07:10 PM


This is so beautiful.  I am way too young to even be thinking of motherhood, but I know that if my mom ever lost me... (probably in your shoes exactly.)  I love the ending...

"I could give them away
Yet they would always be
Lying on the dock of my heart
Just like you left them
When you walked barefoot
Right into heaven."

Be strong.  lots of love.

Joy

ill_tactics
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 149

6 posted 2000-03-13 05:01 PM


No one will replace the love of another, this poem is beautiful.  Thank you for sharing it with us.  Much love, One love, PEACE
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with you
7 posted 2000-03-13 10:07 PM


Septsong~ I can't even find words. I'm so very sorry for your loss.-SEA
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