Dark Poetry #1 |
Lying on the Dock |
Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Your size 13 sneakers Still lie on the bedroom floor In memories I hear them plop As you toss them off On the hardwood floor. Sometimes I imagine I hear them squeak As they run across The basketball court Then I remember How many time your feet Came racing home Followed by the echo Of your voice "Mom, I'm home" My motherly grip Of your memories Holds tight to your sneakers Wishing you would direct me to who You wanted me to give them to Few could fill your size 13 shoes. I could give them away Yet they would always be Lying on the dock of my heart Just like you left them When you walked barefoot Right into heaven. [This message has been edited by Septsong (edited 03-12-2000).] |
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gypsyqlt Member
since 2000-02-08
Posts 147Bradford,Vt USA |
My God, how sad this is...I am a true believer that everything happens for a reason, that God has a plan for each of us. I cannot, however, imagine what reason there could be to justify taking ones child ! You, too, are in my prayers. Find Peace, Jocelyn |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
My heart goes out to you. Being a Mother myself, I know the love for a child and I think it must be unbearable to suffer such loss. My prayers are with you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
sept, this poem takes my words...im so sorry... take care, jm |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Tragic...that is the word that springs to mind... and quietly graceful. K 'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
This is so beautiful. I am way too young to even be thinking of motherhood, but I know that if my mom ever lost me... (probably in your shoes exactly.) I love the ending... "I could give them away Yet they would always be Lying on the dock of my heart Just like you left them When you walked barefoot Right into heaven." Be strong. lots of love. Joy |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
No one will replace the love of another, this poem is beautiful. Thank you for sharing it with us. Much love, One love, PEACE |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Septsong~ I can't even find words. I'm so very sorry for your loss.-SEA |
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