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demonic~angel Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 54Kansas |
I hear your voice. Telling me that I am nothing. You made me what I am. Nothing in my head understands any more. My soul locked up in a cage. Thats why I scream in rage. Not knowing what to do any more. They say your voice is just a figment of my imagination. Are they right? Or are you turning me into that insane girl? You say I am a mistake. Then if that is so why even bother w/ me. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome Demonic Angel!!  Welcome to Passions and the dark forum. Loved this first piece I can see you will be right at home here in the dark. May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Welcome !!!! Great first post !!~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
powerful first impression, Welcome to Dark passions, nice to have you here. jm Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be jackson browne |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Interesting poem. Welcome to the family. No one is a mistake. Even the smallest dullest life is worth something. |
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demonic~angel Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 54Kansas |
Thanks...But you guys just don't understand. My dad died October 28, 1999 and they only way I was brought into this world was b/c he cheated on my mom and she took me in from the very first day and it is so hard that I am a mistake...my mom says no I am not but I am. I feel that way. I have been through alot and every one else has but it is soooo hard living day to day knowing that I am a mistake and knowing that my dad won't be coming home on the weekends any more. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I wish you didn't feel that way. You sound like someone who has a lot to offer the world. Just want you to know that if you stick around here, I garuntee NOBODY here will think you are a mistake. We'll all just work on getting you to not think so anymore! Joy |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
Welcome to the family demonic~angel I think you'll fit in just well here .. your poem among the great one i have read you are not the only one who consider themself as are mistake .....believe me it's not easy to know and to grow up being reminded about it every single day . i know how it is i too have the same problem you should try to make the best out of it.Even if you are a mistake try to think what you can do to improve yourself ( as i do ).Never let ppl look down on , you must always walk with your head up...... CrEaTuRe |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
great expression of strong emotions. thank you for sharing your story with us. welcome. jannel "I'm just saying that we've mistaken one for thousands of words, and for that mistake I've caused you such pain that I damn that word." -10000 Maniacs "Jezebel" |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
I've turned into that insane girl becuz of "him", but I'm trying to ease my mind, thats why I write. NIce job for your first post. Hope to hear more, Much love, One love, PEACE |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
D. Angel I was adopted, (not wanted - a mistake). BUT I am here, I was created, so I am meant to be. I held a lot of resentment in my time too. I only found my biological Dad in November last year, my bio Mum 7 years ago. I therefore can understand more than most where you are coming from, please email me if you'd like to talk. *hugs* May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You have described very well the feelings from within your heart. James |
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