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hathor
Junior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 17


0 posted 2000-03-09 03:49 PM


The Devil is trying to hurt me
trying to rip my
heart to shreads
trying to make me
live my fears
trying to fill my
life with agony
he is trying
just trying



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Walter Poe
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787

1 posted 2000-03-10 07:49 AM


curious poem

seems more like a statement than a poem

not dark as much as a deep fear

hmm

  Did you write the Book of Love
And do you have faith in God above
If the Bible tells you so
Do you believe in rock 'n roll
Can music save your mortal soul
And can you teach me how to dance real slow


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