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Delusion's Fantasy |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas 
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Is it a figment of my imagination? The truth is but a lie! A twisted mind's fabrication? I saw a stone cry! My soul's desecration? Teardrops from a grave! A torturous condemnation? No longer life's slave! Perhaps a grand illusion? You're gone, yet still you're here! Surrounded by deceit and confusion- I feel your presence near! Truth's accusation - It was just the rain!! Merely a perception? Or have I gone insane?!?! ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
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great work..perfect rhyme flow and interesting vocabulary... and good impact on the ending...man I relate  take care,jm ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. janet marie |
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