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StarrGazer
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since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas

0 posted 2000-03-08 05:09 PM


Is it a figment of my imagination?
The truth is but a lie!
A twisted mind's fabrication?
I saw a stone cry!
My soul's desecration?
Teardrops from a grave!
A torturous condemnation?
No longer life's slave!
Perhaps a grand illusion?
You're gone, yet still you're here!
Surrounded by deceit and confusion-
I feel your presence near!
Truth's accusation -
It was just the rain!!
Merely a perception?
Or have I gone insane?!?!


 ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~

© Copyright 2000 Shan Crider - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-03-08 05:14 PM


great work..perfect rhyme flow and interesting vocabulary... and good impact on the ending...man I relate
take care,jm

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
janet marie


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