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StarrGazer
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since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas

0 posted 2000-03-08 02:03 PM


Ok first of all I'd like to apologize n advance for the profanity, I'm not sure how it is looked upon here and I try to avoid it but sometimes in my writing I find it is the only way to drive the point home... Sorry hope I don't offend anyone

~*SilentInsanity*~
white noise
frying my brain
so loudly silent
I can't explain
echoing there
without a sound
my head is racing
spinning round and round
deathly quiet
I feel myself slip
SHUT THE **** UP!
I'm losing my grip
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 ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~


[This message has been edited by StarrGazer (edited 03-09-2000).]

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devinmaria
Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130
Middletown, Ohio
1 posted 2000-03-08 11:41 PM


very simple and to the point.  liked it a bunch and not at all offended.  felt the same way before.

aimee


 Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica

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