Dark Poetry #1 |
Hand on the soul..... |
The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
hand on the soul dripping with anger and sadness untold speaking for hours to an empty,dirty room building the loss feeling everything in bright bold relief the tomb is the world leave a little sanity everywhere heaven in an eye rigid....jaded until the day we die.. |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
such depth in so few words. very well done! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I second danni's words...very deep, and dark...powerful emotions as well.jm ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. janet marie |
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