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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA 
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The malevolent image of you, violently forcing itself into my mind, tears at the tissue surrounding my soul. Your very presence repeatedly thrusting, pounding into my brain, my being, bruising, ripping, and savaging, the bleeding, ragged tendrils, of my slowly dying spirit. Just the thought of you causes shame, the memory of you induces sorrow, pain. You've raped my heart, viciously gaining your own satisfaction, and leaving me lying, exposed to the world, covered in the filth of your issue, nursing a life that is violated, and damaged beyond hope of redemption. ------------------ Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
This makes me sad and almost forlorn...ahhhh! Almost a mirror of how I feel on some days;~( Thanks for evoking the emotion! Jenny |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
JP, your way with words has always amazed me, and this piece adds to that. Such mental violation and anguish, you portray in this piece so well. |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
What can I say? Great portrayal of your emotions. This is very sad and touching, as well as inspiring to me. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Nice to see you back around, JP, This is one of my favorites. ------------------ Michael Anderson Loneliness isn't in being alone; Loneliness is alone in being. |
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