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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
'Pon the white charger Lady Lamp rides fair Peppered daffodils in golden hair Poppy petals line the road While milk white shoulders hold no load flowing form Summers ghost floating haunting paradise coast Scented winds remember her breath that gave life to the night sweet Arabeth And pretty memories days grown old speak of her still, The woman of gold Did you write the Book of Love And do you have faith in God above If the Bible tells you so Do you believe in rock 'n roll Can music save your mortal soul And can you teach me how to dance real slow |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WOW walter...this is gorgeous...you painted a portrait with this one!!!! I love this poem!! jm  ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. janet marie |
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star83 Junior Member
since 2000-02-27
Posts 26SD |
Wonderful imagery and good alliteration. Liked it all.. "True love is like a ghost; everybody talks about it but few have seen it." La Rochefoucauld |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Excellent poem, Walter....love the imagery. Michael |
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