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CrAyZeD
Junior Member
since 1999-08-03
Posts 45


0 posted 1999-08-15 08:15 PM


Dark passions, never see the light.
Dark passions, never wrong or right.

Dark passions, what we all strive to find.
Dark passions, what we all have on our mind.

Dark passions, the only reason to exist.
Dark passions, the only reason we exist.

Dark passions, often done with emotion.
Dark passions, often done with rythmic motion

I hope its not in bad taste i wrote it in five minutes as a bit of a joke.

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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
1 posted 1999-08-15 11:57 PM


CeAyZed

I don't see that your poem was in bad taste so much that it just may not be appropriate for this forum. The "Dark Passions" forum is for poetry dealing with the darker emotions such a lonliness, emptiness, remorse as opposed to love, joy, & togetherness; hard topics such as abuse & death so long as they are written in good taste.
Interesting perception though.

Michael

teenpoet
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since 2001-10-17
Posts 280
Michigan
2 posted 2003-04-24 01:38 PM


That is most certaintly an odd poem.

~Keep dreaming~

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